This diagram shows the basic formation of a brick.

This diagram shows the basic formation of a brick.
This
diagram shows the basic formation of a
brick
. The process requires the digger, roller, mould, cutter, cooling chamber ,drying oven , etc. Now,
lets
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look up the details. First of all , it
isbeginning
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is beginning
with digging up the clay out of the ground, with the digger.
Secondly
, metal and grid are separated from clay, which will go to the roller afterwards.
Furthermore
, to the crushed metal, grid substation, they add sand and water , which is eventually the main ingredients of the
brick
.
Thirdly
, the dough will take an ordinary form , whether with
wire
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cutter or mould. Fourthly, the
almost ready
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material goes straight to the drying oven , where it is supposed to stay for at least 24, and
maximum
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of 48 hours.
Additionally
, the dried bricks are put into the
klin
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kiln
, where the temperature gets up to 1300 degrees. Obviously , after it is cooled in the cooling chamber, within 42-72 hours.
Finally
, it is getting to the point , where the bricks are ready and they are ready to be packed.
As a result
, every other
brick
is going to be
delievered
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delivered
, to be part of the buildings. It is interesting to note that
brick
manufacturing contains almost 9 steps.
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