One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that in some countries using private transportation is prohibited in particular urban centres
One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that in some countries using private transportation is prohibited
in particular
urban centres. Personally, I strongly believe that this
kind of action ought to be taken in most cities, as it has plenty of benefits for both citizens and environment
.
On the one hand, forbidding the use of private vehicles in certain city areas definitely has numerous advantages for Correct article usage
the environment
environment
. Add an article
the environment
In other words
, people can reduce the number of problems related to the pollution of environment
by simply stopping driving personal cars that emit gases and other pollutants. Add an article
the environment
For example
, in Germany, individuals use public transportation to get to work or school instead
of owning automobiles that
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which
affect
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affects
on
the surroundings. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, there are a lot of posters and advertisements that aware visitors and travelers
not Change the spelling
travellers
to
smoke in forests, and so on. Fix the infinitive
apply
Tht
is why, the ambience there is very pure and neat.
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That
On the other hand
, it is rather complicated for people who have families and work around the clock. As far as I know, most parents needed personal automobiles to get their children to school or education centres safely, to be confident in their safety. Moreover
, some employees who have plenty of duties, such
as meetings and business around a town, would not be able to get somewhere they want on time, as it
really time-consuming because of public Add a verb
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wasit
transports
which Fix the agreement mistake
transport
have
a certain schedule.
In conclusion, I fully agree that Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
kind of measure should be followed in other cities, as it really benefits in protecting the surrroundings
and habitat there.Correct your spelling
surroundings
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