Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Just like food, water and light are human basic needs, free

health care

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healthcare

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services

should be provided to both

rich

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the rich

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and poor in every

sociaty

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society

. the manufacturing of new medical treatments and medication has become expensive, leaving the poor to suffer as they do not have the resources to enjoy the privilege of free health care. two years ago, covid-19 hit the world and

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required

scientist

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working day and night to manufacture a

vaccine

in other to stop the

speard

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spread

of the virus. I

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remembered watching the news and hearing the newscaster list large figures of people dying, the whole economy was

shutdown

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,

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left the economy in a bad state.

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, counties had to

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means of purchasing the

vaccine

for their citizens. poor/underdeveloped countries who did not have the means to purchase

this

vaccine

had to leave their citizen stranded. Soon, the world leaders realized they had to help other struggling countries by giving them the

vaccine

free of charge. In no time the

vaccine

reached every inch of the world and reduced the number of death.

this

even clearly showed every country, economy, government, company, poor or rich could work together in other to improve

ther

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their

the

health care of everyone disregarding one's gain and

consider

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the importance

in

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the lives of people who are in dear need.

Although

covid-19 has not been eradicated

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it has been managed.

to sum up

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believe new medical treatments and medical

services

should be provided to the poor as it is to the rich.

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do not dispute the fact that

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these

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services

may be expensive

nevertheless

,

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services

can be paid for through charities, grants and donations.