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Teacher think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenager school students. Do you think it's advantages outweigh it's disadvantages?

#teacher #students #exchange #teenager #school
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The presented bar chart highlights data about how many
people
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 were born in
Australia
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 and outside
Australia
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 residing in metropolitan
areas
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, townships and backcountries, over a fifteen-year
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 between 1995 and 2010. Units are measured in
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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.
Overall
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stand
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 out from the graph is that there were noticeable downward trends with the
number
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 of
people
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born
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 in
Australia
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 and outside
Australia
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 occupying
in
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townships and villages,
whereas
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 the
number
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 of
people
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 who living in metropolitan
areas
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 saw a substantial rise fall over the
period
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 in question. There were two
areas
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 in which the
number
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 of
people
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 living has decreased. The
number
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 of
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 residing in towns and rural
areas
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 started at 20% and 30% respectively and both figures went down. The former dropped to 15% and 15% in 2010. The
number
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 of
people
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 who were born outside
Australia
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 living in towns and rural
areas
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 started at 10% and 40% respectively and both figures went down to 10% and 5%
at the end
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 of the
period
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By contrast
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 and outside
Australia
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 occupying
in
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apply
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metropolitan
areas
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 went in the opposite direction. The
number
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 of
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 began at 50% in 1995, and after
that
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 there was a rapid rise to just over 60% in 2010. The
number
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 of
people
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 who were born outside
Australia
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 living in cities began at 60% and stayed the same
to
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 the end of the
period
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