The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced

Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features
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This
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diagram depicts the manufacturing of
milk
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production. It is clear from the graph that the procedure has seven stages to produce dairy.
According to
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what is shown, cows get grazing on their farm in a good environment.
Following
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this
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, these animals go to the milking machine twice a day, standing in a specific area per cow and absorbing from her breast. After that, the employees get transfer
milk
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into the refriger to store until the truck takes it.
Next,
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the
milk
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has delivered by tankers daily.
Then
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, the main factory has produced a long process which is separated into both categories:
milk
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pasteurized and packaged and chees, cream and butter. After that, the products have a massive distribution in supermarkets and shops. Eventually. we have a big amount of
milk
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.
To sum up
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, we could say that the mechanism had passed several methods to create easily
milk
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by various kinds of producing cow's
milk
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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