Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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world, a great number of

products

which are being produced in the food industries realm have a

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considerable

amount of sugar

while

consumption of

this

processed food’s common ingredient can result in severe diseases for human beings.

Whereas

there is somebody who opines that as these types of

products

become overpriced, the number of individuals who will purchase these goods will decrease, I wholeheartedly disagree with

this

conviction based on some compelling reasons which will

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in detail. The first reason why I disagree is that

this

policy does not seem sensible and logical

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fact that who can warrant that if the prices of these kinds of industrial

products

have been rose, all of the citizens will decide to cut out on sugary edible

things

. Other probable attitudes that can be seen toward the increase in the cost of sugary processed foods should be noticed.

For example

, it is possible that someone, who loves these

things

, eliminates some healthy items from their daily food basket unit they could afford their desired snacks or meals or stop paying for

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excercise

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exercise

in a gym or other places to be able to buy these

products

and these decisions are more dangerous for their health condition. Another reason that I disagree is that not only are not all of the industrial edible items that contain different types of sugar unhealthy but

also

some of them

such

as carbohydrates play a vital role in body function and are considered as the most important source of energy for human bodies. If the price of these

products

such

as rice or pasta rocket up, deprived dwellers will become poorer and weaker in purchasing these

things

and perhaps confront

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serious

and irreparable issues in the health field.

To sum up

, somebody firmly believes that if sugary industrial

products

have been rose, the tendency of people to buy them will decrease. From my perspective,

this

idea does not seem a constructive and effective solution to reduce the consumption of these

things

that sometimes are considered unhealthy foods and we have to seek another remedy for

this

problem.