Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individual and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society .
Although
it has some positive impact ,I would argue that the negative impact is outweighed.
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a larger communication platform,
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their own social circle. because social
software
in
addition
to more convenient contact with relatives and friends,
it
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can
also
let us know more like-minded
people
,
such
as wechat shake
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shake and so on
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let us know more "strangers" away.
In
addition
, we can
also
post some interesting texts and videos on social
software
such
as Weibo, TikTok, etc. These contents are public, if there are
people
who are interested in these contents, they will naturally comment on them, so that we will always meet a
lot
of like-minded
people
.
In
addition
Social
software
can help
people
to know the world faster, because of its large information content and fast update speed, you can know the latest events of the world in a few seconds,
such
as some aviation news or the latest hot news about the entertainment circle.
This
can help
people
make the right judgment, know what is right and what is not right, and prevent going astray. Despite these benefits, I still believe that it has a
lot
of negative impacts.
Firstly
,False fraud information is numerous and easy to spread. Because now with the promotion of the Internet, all kinds of network fraud emerge endlessly, so that you are impossible to guard against. Among them, the fraud methods lurking in the major social
software
,
such
as some issuing false advertisements in various groups and broadcasting false information on major live platforms. Those
people
use various means to infiltrate the major social
software
.
People
are going to lose a
lot
of money to these new scams.
In
addition
,
secondly
, Social
media
has a
lot
to do with
people
's mental health, because studies have found a correlation between social
media
use and psychological problems
such
as anxiety and depression.
People
may be subjected to online violence because of some photos or videos posted on social
media
, they will evaluate and ridicule a person by height, or appearance. which will cause mental illness. In conclusion, despite the fact that social
media
can let us know about the world and make more new friends,
but
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I still believe that social
media
can
also
let us be cheated or make us psychologically hurt or even astray.
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