The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.
The maps depict the information about the layout of the centre of a small city known as Islip from
present
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the present
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to
future
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the future
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.
Overall
, the centre of a small town would become well organised and more modern with the addition of new amenities and alterations. After analysing the maps, it can be seen clearly that nowadays, in the north direction, a countryside
area
is located and near to
this
area
there is a main road
along with
some shops,
while
in future, there would not be any countryside
area
, in the middle of the
map
, a number of buildings would be constructed over there namely bus station, shopping centre, houses and car
park
. The maps
further
collate that all shops would be constructed and around these shops, there is one road in a circular shape. In the former
map
, on the south side, schools and housing would be unchanged in the latter
map
.
In addition
to it, these days, the
park
is established on the east side of the
map
,
however
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park
would be unchanged but it would be decreased in size. Below to bus station, shopping mall and car
park
, a pedestrian
area
would be located. New houses and car parks would be constructed in the north direction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Redevelopment
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrianization
  • Residential area
  • Landscaping
  • Community impact
  • Public transport
  • Commercial zone
  • Environmental footprint
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