You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: •explain what you like about his new house • describe what you enjoyed most about your stay • suggest when and where you could meet next

Dear Tasha, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health, and all is well at my side too.

Firstly

, thank you so much for having me at your home

last

weekend. It was certainly a memorable experience for me that I will cherish for years to come. I loved spending time with you and your family, and of course at your home that you have recently bought. I am impressed with your taste of home design and decor. The house is well decorated with modern art and statues, and the best part of the house is its backyard garden, which has a beautiful elevated landscape and a little fountain. I enjoyed my stay at your place, especially the evening dinners where we all sat together to enjoy the food and have our conversations. I am pleased with your hospitality where you served me home-cooked food daily. I never knew you were a great cook! That being said, now it is my turn to invite you to my place next month. There are upcoming public holidays with a long weekend in the 2nd week of Aug. It would be great if you can plan your visit to my hometown and spend a few days at my place during

this

time. Eagerly waiting for your response. Thanks again for inviting me, I had

such

a great time with you. Best wishes, Sonia

Submitted by ssansar623 on Fri Jul 28 2023

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8 paragraphs

230 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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