The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from
The graph illustrates the changes in quantity and kind of staff food expended by Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
overall
, the biggest change in the food was fish and chips, the big drop in consumption. While
the pizza and Hamburgers they rise all the period given.
Initially
, fish and chips were lootineating in the year 1975, but after that experienced a significant decline until approximating a0 time by 2000
@On the other hand
, Pizza and hamburgers increased significantly.
Pizza starts at about 7 times per year. However
, reached in
the end of 1995 and 2000 to Change the preposition
at
85 time
Add a hyphen
85-time
eath
meal Correct your spelling
each
Staffood
. Correct your spelling
Stafford
Secondly
, Humbargers looked at about 10 fast food in 1975 and then
raised to 1000 in the end
it was a massive change in the line graph. -Add the comma(s)
, in the end,
Submitted by Layla on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!