The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

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the outcomes of

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research about people's activities which make them happy and they are divided into

two

age groups under and over 30 years.

Overall

, it is obvious that

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human beings

differ only in

two

parts of the survey,

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means that they relish

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different things in

two

dissimilar actions. It is interesting to note that factors

such

as doing hobbies,

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succeeding

success

at work and other activities are

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for both age groups,

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it is clearly seen that achieving at work brings happiness for both of them more than other mentioned exercises.

However

,

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adults under 30 have a priority on having a good appearance with

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rate of 18%,

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% of people over 30 are inclined on having

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better financial security.

Furthermore

, 15% of the younger part would rather go travelling,

while

14% of the

olders

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older

would rather spend

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time with their families.