It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centre and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some
people
have proposed that the
use
of motor vehicles and public transport should be stopped in the cities
while
people
should make
use
of
bicycles
alone.
This
essay completely agrees with
this
statement because it is eco-friendly and will result in
reduction
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a reduction
the reduction
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of road traffic
accidents
. The
use
of
bicycles
as the only means of transportation within the city is environmentally friendly.
This
is because there will be no need for fossil fuels to drive
bicycles
and as
such
no greenhouse gases will be released into the atmosphere.
Likewise
, providing
solution
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a solution
the solution
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to the problem of global warming.
For example
, in 2022, a newspaper published that the major cause of air pollution in Lagos State is exhaust released into the environment from vehicles.
In addition
to the above, road
accidents
will reduce significantly when
people
move about cycling. The occurrence of reckless driving under the influence of excessive alcohol consumption will be abolished when
people
ride
bicycles
.
This
will eventually result in
reduction
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a reduction
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in physical injuries and deaths from these
accidents
.
For instance
,
majority
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the majority
show examples
of
accidents
which occurred on our roads have been attributed to dangerous driving. In conclusion, motor vehicles and commercial transport services should be made illegal in city centres. I agree that
bicycles
alone should
be
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use
because it ensures a clean environment and will lead to
less
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fewer
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road mishaps.
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