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The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling

The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling
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The supplied illustration demonstrates the
process
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 of recycling waste
papers
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.
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, it is obvious that waste
paper
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 recycling takes 6 main stages of the linear
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 where the
process
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 initializes with a collection of unusable
papers
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, and ends up with manufacturing
papers
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 for
further
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 use. First of all, the production of usable
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 embarks with collection sheets from public
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 banks and
from
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businesses. Since these
papers
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 are classified manually, it is interesting to note that precisely, sheet grades and inappropriate
papers
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 are separated.
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, the
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 is followed by transportation where
papers
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 are delivered to the
paper
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 mill. The following stage is cleaning, after being pulped and removed from other materials namely staples.
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, the line
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 pursues de-inking, where glues and inks are removed from the sheet. In the final stage,
papers
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 appear in
paper
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 making machine and
papers
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 are fully recycled to have utilization in future.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, papers, paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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