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The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.
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The given pie charts clearly illustrate the activities
made
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that made
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 people happy among a
group
 of
adutls
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adults
who
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apply
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aged 20-50, and the
group
divided
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was divided
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 into two categories which are the participants
who
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aged
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are aged
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 under 30 and over 30.
Overall
, being successful at work is the most significant reason to be happy in both teams,
however
, some factors (including having a good
apperance
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appearance
, travelling, etc.) are changed
according to
 age in the given data. It
is clearly see
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 that
,
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apply
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 there is a
various
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variation
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 of 1%
of
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in
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 being
achievement
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an achievement
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 person
at
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in
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 the career path between
the
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those
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 under 30 and
the
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those
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 over 30. These amounts are 31% and 32% respectively. The number of
the
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participants doing hobbies in the
group
 of less than 30 is lower than the
group
 of above thirties with 24% of the total amount.
Additionally
, the percentages of the
others
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other
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 factors in
the
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apply
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both communities see
the
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apply
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minor differences with 14% and 10%. Having a good feature is not
a
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important in
the
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those
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 over 30 compared to
the
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apply
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financial stability which has
the
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a
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 20% ratio of the total activities.
This
 amount is similar to people who
aged
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are aged
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 under 30 and
being
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are
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 happy with a good
apperance
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appearance
 at 18%. Travelling in the team of the younger participants and being with their family in the older
group
 have
the
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averaged 14.5 of the given pie charts.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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