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made
people happy among a Correct pronoun usage
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of adutls
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adults
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aged 20-50, and the Correct pronoun usage
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group
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was divided
who
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aged
under 30 and over 30.
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are aged
Overall
, being successful at work is the most significant reason to be happy in both teams, however
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appearance
according to
age in the given data.
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those
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those
the
participants doing hobbies in the Correct article usage
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group
of less than 30 is lower than the group
of above thirties with 24% of the total amount. Additionally
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both communities see Remove the article
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minor differences with 14% and 10%.
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those
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the
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