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The chart below provides information on the methods of waste disposal in four European countries.

The chart below provides information on the methods of waste disposal in four European countries.
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The given bar chart illustrates how
waste
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 is disposed of using 4 methods, namely biological
treatment
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,
landfill
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, burning and recycling in four countries: the Netherlands, Spain, Italy and the UK.
Overall
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,
landfill
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 is the most efficient way to dispose of
waste
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 in the Netherlands, Spain and Italy
while
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 in the UK biological
treatment
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 is the most common method for it. As can be seen, in the Netherlands the highest percentage of
waste
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 disposal is
landfill
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 with 41% followed by burning, recycling and biological
treatment
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 with 29%, 19% and 11% respectively. In Spain, the maximum and minimum percentages of processing collected rubbish are
landfill
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 at 45% and burning at 5%.
Furthermore
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, biological
treatment
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 is 3% higher than recycling, which is 23%.
However
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, the Italian government buries most of their rubbish (40%) which is 7% more than biological
treatment
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.
In addition
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, they recycle about 11% of their
waste
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, which is 5% less than burning them. In the UK, approximately 45% of their
waste
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 is treated biologically
whereas
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 it is dumped into landfills with 40% less. It is
also
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 noteworthy to mention that burning, and recycling methods report the same figure (24%) in that country.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, treatment, landfill with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste disposal
  • Recycling
  • Landfills
  • Incineration
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental implications
  • Waste management
  • Government policies
  • Public awareness
  • Innovative methods
  • Evolution of waste disposal methods
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