The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The bar chart provided reveals the results of a conducted survey in five distinct

cities

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in Australia about how often people buy

coffee

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and tea and what their habits of drinking are.

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, as can be vividly seen from the graph, in Melbourne and Hobart, the most common way of drinking tea or

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is going to a cafe,

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in all given

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, buying fresh

coffee

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does not receive much attention. As illustrated by the chart, in all

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, with the exception of Adelaide, going to a cafe for

coffee

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or tea is the most prevalent among people, accounting for just above 55% to approximately 63%, which belongs to Melbourne and Hobart.

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, the figure for Adelaide is just under 50%.

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, comprising about 34%-44%, buying fresh

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places in the third rank in all

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. Buying instant

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, makes up for about 45%-54%, with the highest proportion in Hobart, at nearly 54%.

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some people believe that the internet has made books and libraries obsolete. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide reason and support with examples.

Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centers is for privately owned cars to be banned, others however, think this is an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.