The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart provided reveals the results of a conducted survey in five distinct
cities
in Australia about how often people buy
coffee
and tea and what their habits of drinking are.
Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the graph, in Melbourne and Hobart, the most common way of drinking tea or
coffee
is going to a cafe,
whereas
in all given
cities
, buying fresh
coffee
does not receive much attention. As illustrated by the chart, in all
cities
, with the exception of Adelaide, going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea is the most prevalent among people, accounting for just above 55% to approximately 63%, which belongs to Melbourne and Hobart.
Moreover
, the figure for Adelaide is just under 50%.
By contrast
, comprising about 34%-44%, buying fresh
coffee
places in the third rank in all
cities
. Buying instant
coffee
,
however
, makes up for about 45%-54%, with the highest proportion in Hobart, at nearly 54%.
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