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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, there is a huge debate about trust because, in any
relationship
, trust plays a vital role. A large group of people in its favour.
However
, others have the opposite opinion. The following paragraphs shed light on my personal experience with a suitable example. I agree with the statement that a
relationship
 totally depends on the truth. There are numerous reasons why I am in favour of it. First and foremost, when people tell everything accurately to their
partner
, the
relationship
 is stronger.
In other words
, honesty increases your connection with each other. Another pivotal aspect is that the value of truth is great as compared to lies. To justify my state of mind, I would like to give an example of a survey that was conducted by the University of Sydney. The survey revealed the finding that most of the breakups were
due to
 just telling a lie.
Furthermore
, when individuals hurt others' feelings, the other person gets hurt, and he or she leaves them.
On the contrary
, some people oppose the arguments aforementioned for many reasons.
According to
 fewer individuals, they believe that when a person tells everything to his
partner
 openly, it hurts a lot. It is because in, every
relationship
, there are a few things you should hide from your
partner
 for the betterment of your
relationship
.
Moreover
, expectations are let down when you don’t tell a lie. To justify my state of mind, when a couple fixes a plan for dinner and anyone arrives late for personal reasons, but he or she tells a lie, I am late owing to traffic conditions. You should speak a little bit less with your
partner
 to save your
relationship
. To recapitulate,
according to
 the arguments aforementioned above, One can reach the conclusion that the benefits of the topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Honesty
  • Trust
  • Open communication
  • Misunderstandings
  • Hurtful
  • Justified
  • Cultural values
  • Integrity
  • Credibility
  • Blunt
  • Conflicts
  • Subjective
  • Perspectives
  • Relationship dynamics
  • Intimate connections
  • Protective lies
  • Ethical considerations
  • Transparency
  • Diplomacy
  • Authenticity
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