Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Road safety is the major priority nowadays as there are a lot more drivers as compared to the past. It is believed

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reduce the speed and others think of some alternative ways

instead

of adopting the former one.

Therefore

, I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin

with, the major thing on the highway to control most of the hazards is to restrain the maximum speed. Interestingly, it has been noticed that everyone in

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world

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in a hurry to reach their destination quickly;

therefore

they forget about the restraint of speed they are expected to drive.

As a result

, they drive unconsciously by keeping the time of their work in mind

instead

of the safety of themselves and others.

However

, they should wake up early to reach on time at their designated location

instead

of speeding up and losing their

as well as

others' life.

For instance

, the usual office time is 9am and they should wake up

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to reach their 10 minutes before by checking the traffic

as well as

weather conditions which will

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them from speeding up and reaching there securely.

On the other hand

, some people think of other alternatives to maintain lane safety. First and foremost one is to put restrictions on driving

while

drinking as it leads to the loss of

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consciousness and

as a consequence

road accidents can take place.

In addition

, the lane should be checked regularly to make sure there are not any uneven surfaces there which become an obstruction for people to drive safely.

For instance

, if a roadway requires repair

then

the construction should take place regularly to control the accidents.

Furthermore

, there must be restrictions on using cell phones

while

driving which distracts the driver from driving within the exact speed restriction. To illustrate, when a phone rings a person gets distracted to think for a

while

who is calling whether to pick a call or not which can cause an accident.

Therefore

, phones should be kept in the back seat for safe driving.

To conclude

, it is the responsibility of each individual to make their and other's life safe by driving within the maximum speed limit.

Moreover

, it is not possible to only reduce the maximum speed limit to reduce the chances of hazard but

along with

that restrictions on drinking

as well as

cell phones and proper road construction should be required to save individuals'

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.