Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Road safety is the major priority nowadays as there are a lot more drivers as compared to the past. It is believed
by
some Change preposition
that
to
reduce the speed and others think of some alternative ways Fix the infinitive
apply
instead
of adopting the former one. Therefore
, I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, the major thing on the highway to control most of the hazards is to restrain the maximum speed. Interestingly, it has been noticed that everyone in this
fast pacing
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fast-paced
used to be
in a hurry to reach their destination quickly; Wrong verb form
is
therefore
they forget about the restraint of speed they are expected to drive. As a result
, they drive unconsciously by keeping the time of their work in mind instead
of the safety of themselves and others. However
, they should wake up early to reach on time at their designated location instead
of speeding up and losing their as well as
others' life. For instance
, the usual office time is 9am and they should wake up according
to reach their 10 minutes before by checking the traffic Change preposition
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as well as
weather conditions which will control
them from speeding up and reaching there securely.
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prevent
On the other hand
, some people think of other alternatives to maintain lane safety. First and foremost one is to put restrictions on driving while
drinking as it leads to the loss of their
consciousness and Correct pronoun usage
apply
as a consequence
road accidents can take place. In addition
, the lane should be checked regularly to make sure there are not any uneven surfaces there which become an obstruction for people to drive safely. For instance
, if a roadway requires repair then
the construction should take place regularly to control the accidents. Furthermore
, there must be restrictions on using cell phones while
driving which distracts the driver from driving within the exact speed restriction. To illustrate, when a phone rings a person gets distracted to think for a while
who is calling whether to pick a call or not which can cause an accident. Therefore
, phones should be kept in the back seat for safe driving.
To conclude
, it is the responsibility of each individual to make their and other's life safe by driving within the maximum speed limit. Moreover
, it is not possible to only reduce the maximum speed limit to reduce the chances of hazard but along with
that restrictions on drinking as well as
cell phones and proper road construction should be required to save individuals' life
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly states your position and the main points that will be covered in the essay. Also, provide a clear conclusion that summarizes the main points and restates your opinion.
task response
Make sure to address both views in a balanced way, providing sufficient detail and examples for each point of view. Consider the impact of your personal opinion on the discussion.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.