Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Everyone wants to become rich and a celebrity. In order to achieve it, we have to pay the price. In
this
essay
we will discuss what is the benefits and problems of the celebrity.
Famous is the admiration, appreciation Add a comma
,essay
to
someone who is so Change preposition
for
talanted
Correct your spelling
talented
such
as film
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a film
stars
or Fix the agreement mistake
star
sportmen
...Correct your spelling
sportsmen
ect
. They Correct your spelling
etc
heve
everything Correct your spelling
have
what
normal Change the word
that
people
wanted: the
fame, money... and they live in Correct article usage
apply
the
very good condition. They will have more Correct article usage
apply
opportunity
than the other Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
. Therefore
, they can send their children to private school
and build a stable future for their kids. They will have a Fix the agreement mistake
schools
change
to meet the influencer _to make Correct your spelling
chance
friend
and do business together. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
Although
they work quite hard, they may earn money more easily than the
other Correct article usage
apply
people
.
On the other hand
, they will not have privacy or private in their life. Everything they do will get caught by the TV reporter , newspaper and so on. They have to be careful what they do or what they say. One of the famous actress
in China, Change to a plural noun
actresses
she
lost Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
career just bad speech or a famous singer in Vietnam lost his job because he get Change the word
her
involed
a sexual abuse. Correct your spelling
involved
That is
why they have to be a good model not only Change preposition
in skill
skill
but Fix the agreement mistake
skills
also
ethical
. As Replace the word
ethics
a
famous Correct article usage
apply
people
, we have to improve our skills in order to achieve the goal. We can not successful
Add a missing verb
be successful
just
keep it like that, we have to learn and work hard to improve our skills.
Correct word choice
and just
To conclude
, everything always has two sides. That is
why we need to ensure the good things we have and try to improve ourselves. Famous is the kight with 2 shapes, but advantage
is more than Add an article
the advantage
disadvantages
.Correct article usage
the disadvantages
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