some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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favour of passing down their tradition to the younger generations to deter it from distinct, I personally agree with those who suggest young people should develop their unique
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based on individuals. On the one hand, some people
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about the negative impact derived from globalization,
due to
strong
culture
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the main trend in the world and
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the
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of minor
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. Not only can
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culture
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diversity, but
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their social identity.
For example
, many young
Singaporens
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Singaporeans
nowadays speak English as their main language, which lead to the number of youth who could not speak their mother tongues growing in size,
along with
it, the decremental respect to their traditional
culture
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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