Online shopping has become increasingly popular. Why do people shop online? What are the environmental problems caused by this trend?

Nowadays, shopping moved from

in store

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to online. Is a fact that people prefer to buy

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,

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as clothes, food, electronics and more, from home, easily checking on the computer what a store can offer them. In

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happes

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happens

and the

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consequences

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dangerous trend,

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believe, is provoking to our world.

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, I want to point out the reasons why people might prefer online

shoppping

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shopping

.

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conformed

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by a survey

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in Perth that 75

percent

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of Australians prefer to purchase from a

web site

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website

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rather than a

phisical

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physical

shop

.

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It is for sure a matter of time

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because not having to go to a shop will save a good part of the day, given that, you can

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acquire

just using your mobile

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you are

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the public

transports

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or

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been

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confortably sitted

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comfortably sitting

on your couch at home.

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, with the advent of online shops and big

platforms

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,platforms

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you can find things that

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would not be available in your area. For these motivations online shopping is

prefferred

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preferred

. Is faster, easier and you can get parcels from

alll

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all

over the world.

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, there are not just advantages of

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trend, but it is causing serious problems to our

enviroment

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environment

. The consequences of the use of platforms

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Amazon

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as Amazon

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or Ebay

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are

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ùn high use of packaging and

transports

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transport

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. Enfacts when just buy a little thing from the internet, it arrives

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at

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your place, covered first in plastic and

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wrapped again to

do

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not get damaged and

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again closed in a box. I truly believe that

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is insane. the

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of materials

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paper and plastic that we are wasting and all the effort required to produce them, as disboscaments and plastic production are slowly killing our

worls

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world

. And, if we consider that 35

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of parcels

recieved

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received

, mostly

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clothes

in which we do not fit, are sent back, the number of

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these

this

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waste is almost doubled.

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to

get

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all that stuff from far countries or even from shops next door, is needed a huge use of

transports

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transport

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and

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keep

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encrasing

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increasing

the

pollutions

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pollution

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more and more. It would be better to walk to the shop or minimize

the

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apply

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online shopping for things that we really cannot get by ourselves.

IN

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this

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essay

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put in evidence the reasons

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for

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trend, but

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wanted

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highlight the

much

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more bad effects

that

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is

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causing to our environment. I believe that it should be regulated and limited to try to save what we can.