The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK  from 2001 and 2008
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals who consumed five proteins of fruits and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008 in the Uk In 2001 , men consumed around 17% of
protein
on a daily basis and their
consumption
increased dramatically over time and rose up to almost 26% by 2006 . ,
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it experienced a slight decline to about 25 % in 2008 . The proportion of women who ate
protein
was at about 20 % and had the biggest
consumption
in comparison with men and
children
.
Moreover
, the chart showed a dramatic increase to approximately 35 % by 2006 .
However
, the percentage fell slightly in 2007 and 2008 to around 34 and 33 respectively . The numbers of
children
who consumed
protein
were low in the first three years . ,
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their
consumption
increased in 2006 to almost 17 % and continued to grow sharply to about 23 % . ,
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it experienced a slight decrease to around 21 % by 2008 .
Overall
, women ate more vegetables and fruits in comparison with men and
children
.
However
, the
consumption
of
protein
for both males and
children
had a dramatic increase till 2007 and had a small fall down in the next year .
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