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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals who consumed five proteins of fruits and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008 in the Uk In 2001 , men consumed around 17% of
protein
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 on a daily basis and their
consumption
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 increased dramatically over time and rose up to almost 26% by 2006 . ,
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 it experienced a slight decline to about 25 % in 2008 . The proportion of women who ate
protein
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 was at about 20 % and had the biggest
consumption
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 in comparison with men and
children
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 .
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 , the chart showed a dramatic increase to approximately 35 % by 2006 .
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 , the percentage fell slightly in 2007 and 2008 to around 34 and 33 respectively . The numbers of
children
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 who consumed
protein
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 were low in the first three years . ,
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 their
consumption
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 increased in 2006 to almost 17 % and continued to grow sharply to about 23 % . ,
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 it experienced a slight decrease to around 21 % by 2008 .
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 , women ate more vegetables and fruits in comparison with men and
children
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.
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 , the
consumption
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 of
protein
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 for both males and
children
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 had a dramatic increase till 2007 and had a small fall down in the next year .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words protein, consumption, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Portion: a serving size of food.
  • Trend: a general direction in which something is developing or changing.
  • Demographic: related to the structure of populations.
  • Awareness: knowledge or perception of a situation or fact.
  • Socioeconomic status: a person's economic and social position based on income, education, and occupation.
  • Accessibility: the quality of being easy to obtain or use.
  • Guidelines: a set of recommendations or advice on how something should be done.
  • Subsidy: a sum of money granted by the government to assist an industry or business.
  • Lifestyle: the way in which a person lives.
  • Public health: the health of the population as a whole, especially as monitored, regulated, and promoted by the state.
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