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The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
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The pie charts give information on the proportion of
sodium
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, saturated
fats
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 and added sugars in breakfast, lunch,
dinner
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 and
snacks
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 in the USA.
Overall
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, the largest
amount
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 of
sodium
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 and saturated
fats
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 is used in
dinner
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.
However
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, the
amount
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 of sugar which is added to
snacks
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 is the highest. Among typical meals, the
amount
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 of
sodium
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, saturated
fats
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 and added sugars in breakfast is the lowest ( 14%, 16% and 16% respectively). At
dinner
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, 43% of
sodium
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 and 37% of saturated
fats
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 are consumed. The proportion of these two nutrients in it is the greatest of the four types of meals. But, the content of sugar is the lowest( 23%) in
dinner
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.
In contrast
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, people in the USA utilize the biggest
amount
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 of sugar(42%) in
snacks
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.
Nevertheless
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, they use only 14% of
sodium
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 and 21% of saturated
fats
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 in
snacks
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. In terms of lunch, there is no significant difference in the proportion of these three nutrients ( 29% of
sodium
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, 26 % of saturated
fats
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 and 19% of added sugars).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, fats, dinner, snacks, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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