You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

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It is widely believe that wealthy nation often provide financy to poorer
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, but
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some reason, it does not solve poverty.
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, develop
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should give another types of help to the poor
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rather than financial aid. Personally, i can neither agree nor disagree with
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statement for variety of reasons. I partly agree that finnacial is not the only
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to solving the poverty problems, there are many more and other factor that lead to
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problem. First reason is the
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that being provided is misused for personal purposes.
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means that the
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will go to the government
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of the people who need it.
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: Lebanon is an
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that still develop a
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, but there are a
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of inflation situation that happening cause of government don'
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know how to use the
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and use it for personal benefit or useless things. The next reason is that
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is not capable of developing,
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the lack of education,
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make enterprises use the
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that provided wrong
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, causing many businesses to fail. An standard example is all the
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in Southest asia, despite the fact that they being gifted a
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money
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, still can'
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not become a wealthier
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.
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, i agree with the viewpoint that rich
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need to give other types of help to develop
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.
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is because
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of giving
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, why don'
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give the poorer
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a large amount of knowledge
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as education institutions.
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of reliance, the poorer
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need to improve their ability to get rich.
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: after receiving the
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, Vietnam have try a
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of
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to raise the level of education, find another
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in business by learning from the wealthier
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,
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bring Vietnam to become the develop
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with a
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of achievement in business. In conclusion,
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that finnancial aid can'
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not solving the problem of poverty. i tend to believe that we should give another help
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as constructing more educational facilities
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