You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
It is widely believe that wealthy nation often provide financy to poorer
country
, but due to
some reason, it does not solve poverty. Therefore
, develop countries
should give another types of help to the poor countries
rather than financial aid. Personally, i can neither agree nor disagree with this
statement for variety of reasons.
I partly agree that finnacial is not the only way
to solving the poverty problems, there are many more and other factor that lead to this
problem. First reason is the money
that being provided is misused for personal purposes. This
means that the money
will go to the government instead
of the people who need it. For example
: Lebanon is an country
that still develop a lot
, but there are a lot
of inflation situation that happening cause of government don't
know how to use the money
and use it for personal benefit or useless things. The next reason is that country
is not capable of developing, due to
the lack of education, this
make enterprises use the money
that provided wrong way
, causing many businesses to fail. An standard example is all the countries
in Southest asia, despite the fact that they being gifted a lot
money
, still can't
not become a wealthier countries
.
On the other hand
, i agree with the viewpoint that rich country
need to give other types of help to develop countries
. This
is because instead
of giving money
, why don't
give the poorer country
a large amount of knowledge such
as education institutions. Instead
of reliance, the poorer countries
need to improve their ability to get rich. For instance
: after receiving the money
, Vietnam have try a lot
of way
to raise the level of education, find another way
in business by learning from the wealthier country
, this
bring Vietnam to become the develop countries
with a lot
of achievement in business.
In conclusion, although
that finnancial aid can't
not solving the problem of poverty. i tend to believe that we should give another help such
as constructing more educational facilitiesSubmitted by yeshomeclass on
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