You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

It is widely believe that wealthy nation often provide financy to poorer
country
, but
due to
some reason, it does not solve poverty.
Therefore
, develop
countries
should give another types of help to the poor
countries
rather than financial aid. Personally, i can neither agree nor disagree with
this
statement for variety of reasons. I partly agree that finnacial is not the only
way
to solving the poverty problems, there are many more and other factor that lead to
this
problem. First reason is the
money
that being provided is misused for personal purposes.
This
means that the
money
will go to the government
instead
of the people who need it.
For example
: Lebanon is an
country
that still develop a
lot
, but there are a
lot
of inflation situation that happening cause of government don'
t
know how to use the
money
and use it for personal benefit or useless things. The next reason is that
country
is not capable of developing,
due to
the lack of education,
this
make enterprises use the
money
that provided wrong
way
, causing many businesses to fail. An standard example is all the
countries
in Southest asia, despite the fact that they being gifted a
lot
money
, still can'
t
not become a wealthier
countries
.
On the other hand
, i agree with the viewpoint that rich
country
need to give other types of help to develop
countries
.
This
is because
instead
of giving
money
, why don'
t
give the poorer
country
a large amount of knowledge
such
as education institutions.
Instead
of reliance, the poorer
countries
need to improve their ability to get rich.
For instance
: after receiving the
money
, Vietnam have try a
lot
of
way
to raise the level of education, find another
way
in business by learning from the wealthier
country
,
this
bring Vietnam to become the develop
countries
with a
lot
of achievement in business. In conclusion,
although
that finnancial aid can'
t
not solving the problem of poverty. i tend to believe that we should give another help
such
as constructing more educational facilities
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