This graph shows the amount of money spent on books in germany, france, Italy and Australia between 1995 to 2005.
The line graph shows information about the amount of money spent on books in four different nations from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, we can see that Germany is the highest of the four nations. Linking Words
However
, the money spent on books in Austria started at the lowest. Italy and France are levels of.
Germany had by far the largest number,with $95 US dollars, before ending the date at peaking at nearly $85 US dollars in 2003. But it started with $80 US dollars. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the expenditure in Australia is the lowest of the four nations. It reached a low of 30 tons, after which experienced a decline to 30 in 40 much, before ending the era at more than 70 total in 2005.
The budget for France remains unchanged. in the first years , it is only more than 55 banks. and continue to 2001 it is creased 15 lot , before ending the time at 75 much in 2005. Linking Words
Finally
, the amount of money spent on Italy started at only 50 tons. it creased and decreased from 50 to 55 thousand periods 6 years between 1995 to2001 . After the expenditure on Italy accounts for more 60 total in 2005.Linking Words
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