Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss with sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, online reading
have
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become a trend, whether it’s reading newspapers, e-books or
articles
. Because of
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modern technology reading is developed into a portable device, which allows us to watch and read
news
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the news
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when we are travelling outside. It seems to me that
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several individuals
also
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that physical reading is
far
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better choice than digital provisions.
To begin
with, excessive use of computers and technology is now interpreting our lives in reading too.
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,
also
gives us significant advantages, but reading may not be an option to be considered by everyone
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elders.
However
, even today including
western
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countries prefer to read
news
and
articles
through
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newspapers. Rather than relying on
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radio or television
also
internet
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.
In addition
, if we talk about
benefits
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of it not only reading will give us
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boost to learn various
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but
also
provide us accurate information. To illustrate
to
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this
,
multi media
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is broader and huge and finding precise and specific
news
on
related
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topic
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could become harder. Or widespread
of
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fake
news
articles
can snap your perception
on
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what is correct and not.
On the other hand
, people including me would definitely opt
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multimedia technology in terms of either reading
news
or blog
articles
or watching
live
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news
channel
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. Since
this
development
have
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spread into popularity, it has saved
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crisis, but in more practical ways.
For instance
, we have all known that trees had to
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down to make paper supply, which would contribute
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production
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of
newspaper
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newspapers
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.
Instead
of
this
why can’t we shift our
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of
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news
into
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online
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the online
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platform
.
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For example
,
this
evolution would take years to achieve, yet it will become more labour-saving. Online platforms
has
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millions of
news
in
archive
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the archive
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, which could not
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to
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be stored or
taking
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care of
newspaper
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in newspaper
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. In conclusion,
news
reading pattern id more sort of individual choice and how would they prefer to read. In my opinion,
internet
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is the best way to read
news
, blogs or our favourite books in
much
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affordable
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way in
compare
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to limitation accessibility of newspapers.
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  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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