The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart presents the stages in the
brick
production which is used for the construction. To produce
bricks
,
main
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ingredient (
clay
) is processed in seven stages, beginning with digging
clay
and ending with packaging the
brick
before delivered to the
costumer
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customer
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.
Firstly
, the initial step of making
brick
involves digging
clay
from the ground by using
large
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a large
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digger.
Then
, the
clay
is put in the metal grid to make it transformed into small pieces.
The next step is
mixed
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the
clay
with two other ingredients which are sand and water with perfect
proportion
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. The mixtures are formed into
brick
by two methods either by wiring cutter or by moulding.
Subsequently
, the
bricks
are dried in the oven for 1-2 days. After 2 days drier, the
bricks
are passed through the 3 stage processes including heater and cooler, started from heating
with
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200 C-960C as a moderate kiln, continued with
second
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stage by heating the
bricks
with higher heat than the first process around 870 C- 1300 C, and
lastly
, cooled for 2-3 day in the chamber.
Finally
, the
bricks
are packaged and delivered to retail and industry users.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words brick, bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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