The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.

The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
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The maps illustrate the changes in the Local
Museum
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at the
north-east
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corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987,
2007
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and 2007
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. It's clear from the first map that the Local
Museum
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was divided into three compartments, with the public reading
room
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representing more than
a
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half of the
museum
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building, leaving the rest of the space to the hall and the kitchen. The garden in 1957 had the most vegetation,
while
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the number of trees declined in 1987.
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, in 1987, the public reading
room
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was replaced by the meeting
room
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. The hall
also
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expanded, taking up where used to be the kitchen. As is seen from the third map, 2007 saw an expansion of the
museum
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building along Hartford Street. The
theater
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,
instead
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of the meeting
room
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, accounted for around 3/4 of the whole building,
whereas
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the hall remained unchanged. The garden outside the building was converted into a parking area. In summary, the maps illustrate noticeable
changed
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happened
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to the Local
Museum
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in Huddersfield between 1957 and 2007. Both the indoor and outdoor parts of the
museum
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has
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changed dramatically.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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  • differently-abled visitors
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