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Band 6.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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 Ahmed I am writing here because I am preparing to get a BIM qualification, So I am requesting some time off work to complete it. As you know, I am studying to get BIM certification in the third week of
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 month on 25th July,
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, I am asking to take some time off. On return, I would work overtime and finish my office tasks earlier complete them, and review them with my supervisor Eng. Ahmed to sure that it is done correctly.
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, The BIM certification will be useful to enhance my management work and will improve our results and make them more accurate in a short time, So that will create a chance to accept more projects for the company,
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 will increase and that will expand our field from just design to design and supervision. Regards, Ahmed Altalhi
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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