The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These
two
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figures reveal how residents of a city commute to the hospital in
two
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different years.
Overall
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, it is obvious there were various changes in the hospital area. One of the noticeable differences was Hospital RD and another one was Car Park. In
two
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years City Hospital was surrounded by Ring Road but a Public car park was located in the eastern part of it in 2010. In 2007, the car park was for both staff and the public,
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that space was allocated to staff in 2010. As can be seen, there were six bus stops in the hospital RD replaced by
two
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roundabouts in the northern and the southern part of it.
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, there was not any bus station in 2007
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, there was one of them in the western part of Hospital Rd which had access to both roundabout
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • intersection
  • roundabout
  • bus station
  • traffic flow
  • organized
  • dedicated
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • road markings
  • traffic regulation
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