The graph below shows the percentages of people in four age groups who had been to the cinema more than once a month, in the period between 2000 and 2011.

The graph below shows the percentages of people in four age groups who had been to the cinema more than once a month, in the period between 2000 and 2011.
The given line chart illustrates the differences in percentages of people who went to the cinema 2 times or more in a month based on different age groups from 7 to over 35
years
old in a period of 11
years
since 2000.
Overall
, 7 to 14-year-old children had the almost highest proportion of people who had been to the movie house more than once a month
while
citizens over 35
years
old reported the lowest percentage in the given term. As can be seen, the percentage of children who watched a movie in the movie house more than once fluctuated wildly between 38% and 42% in the provided
years
.
In addition
, 30% of the 7-14 group went to the movies more than once in 2000, whose percentages had moderate fluctuations reporting about 45% in the final year.
Although
the numbers for the third group were not stable during the term, the first and
last
years
showed almost the same proportion (20%). It is
also
noteworthy to mention that under %5 of men and women more than 35
years
old attend a cinema throughout the given period.
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