These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

It is true that
clothing
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the clothing
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trend is shuffling very fast because of the advancement of technology and
wide
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a wide
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variety of materials. I believe it is
positive
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a positive
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trend because the individual can make their
chose
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choice
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and uplift their attitudes and personality.
Firstly
, everyone can select the
clothes
which he
want
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wants
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to wear
as well as
feel comfortable. It makes them happy by choosing the
clothes
which
suits
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suit
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them more.
For example
, everyone wants to look smart and good as in trendy
clothes
therefore
, they wear different
clothes
for different occasions which helps them to look
same
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the same
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as they want for any program.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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