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Many adults think that childhood and schooldays are the best years of a person's life.What the reason's for this? Do you agree or disagree ?

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I strongly agree that
childhood
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 and schooldays are the best years of a person's
life
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. The reason for
this
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 is described in the below information. The below information has
much
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 reasons why
childhood
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 and
school
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time
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 are the best. In the
,
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childhood
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 children have fewer problems compared to old people.
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, a kid studying in a
school
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 has just one responsibility for getting good marks. In
childhood
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, kids have one responsible for getting a high percentage. In
childhood
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time
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 present give what the child is looking for. As adults have many responsibilities and
this
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 is the main reason why there think a child's
life
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 is the best
life
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 there have lived that
life
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. So, children should enjoy their
childhood
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time
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 and schooling days because it's the best
time
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 for
life
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.
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, Schooldays are
best
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 days because in
school
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 ,
time
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 the kids are free to do whatever they like to do.
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 people are in
a
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school
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 at have the
time
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 they can learn new things
as well as
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 can spend
time
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 with their friends.
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, students in
a
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an
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 institution have to focus on books but after ,schooling they have to focus
also
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 in salary and income too.
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, The main benefits for a child in schooling
time
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 is that he or she can spend more
time
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 with her friends and can
expore
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explore
 new places, food, people, and culture and can try new things that they love.
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, the above reason describes that
childhood
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 and schooldays are the best years of a person's
life
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.
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