WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In countries like Britain, when someone gets old, they often go live in an old age home with other old people. These homes provide all types of
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facilities like nurses to look after them.
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, there is an additional spend which needs to be taken
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of. In my opinion, both
government
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and families should take the burden of
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expense.
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, citizens of any nation contribute to its growth and development for about forty years in their prime of life.
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, a
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official would start his duty at the age of twenty-two and would go on working for the next forty years before retiring.
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, adding to the betterment of his country and people.
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, he would end up paying income tax and other kinds of taxes adding to the nation’s economy.
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,
government
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is responsible to take
care
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of its citizens either directly through pension or indirectly through the expense of the
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.
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, parents take
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of their child from the beginning of their lives be it through healthcare, good education or personal development for at least fifteen to twenty years.
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, it becomes a moral
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of the child to take
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of their parents whenever in need.
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, in
India
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it is a tradition for elderly people to stay in children’s houses and all day-to-day needs are taken
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of.
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, it is a moral
responsibility
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to take
care
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of old-age parents. To summarise, it becomes the
responsibility
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of the
government
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and families alike to pay for
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homes making lives easier for senior citizens. The share of expenses can vary in each country.
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,
this
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responsibility
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should be taken by both parties.
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