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write an email to manager for payslips to the manager with all the details

#email #manager #payslips
Hi Pankaj, I am reaching out to follow up on our previous conversation regarding my monthly payslips. Post our
last
 discussion, I haven't received any update on the payslip in the ticketing portal. Even in the new ticketing portal after multiple follow-ups on the ticket and almost over a month, today (30/07/2023), just now received an unclear response from the team.
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 type of
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Fix the agreement mistake
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 in getting payslips with my previous organizations in UAE
nor
Correct word choice
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 my colleagues at client locations who are working through Freezone. Please find the attached ticket conversation FYR. As you were already aware, the monthly payslip is the most bothering concern for me. I kindly request your assistance in pushing
this
 matter forward with the concerned team.
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