The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.

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The masterplans represent the changes that have been made for Felixstone

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over a

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period from 1967 to 2001. The net area of the city has remained the same over the

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period. Since 1967,

Golf

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course has been retained to its original size and shape. Three units have been added in 2001 on the lefthand side of the High

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and the opposite side of the street has been converted from 5 shops in 1967 to 8 residential units in 2001. Farmland has been redesigned and built into a Swimming pool with two Tennis

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courts

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with a Hotel. Natural landscapes like dunes have been maintained to

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original condition and

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aforestation

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has inclined over the

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period. Renewable energy systems have been introduced

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the trees and the dunes for more sustainable landscapes facing the winds coming in from the sea. A

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car park

has been added to the hotel and

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is been in the same place

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since

1997. The marina has been converted into a public beach. The fish market has been demolished and changed into a private beach.

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