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The presented diagram depicts the changes that took place in the floor plan of a local library from 20 years ago until now. As can be seen , from the east to the west side the institution dramatically changed. only just the entrance remained stable. To commence with the western section , all the CDS,videos and computer games have been removed and replaced with storytelling events and children's fantasy

books

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, two sofas are added as well.

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, adult myth booklets have given their place to all reference ones. Not only the

books

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but

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the reading room has changed to a computer room.Another notable alteration happened to the middle segment of the library used to take up by tables and chairs,

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however

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it removes after 20 years. The second switch was at the east chunk of the library

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as children's

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which are displaced by the lecture room.

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adult non-fiction

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have turned into fiction ones,an information desk and self-service machines are joined.

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,the enquiry desk has been switched to a Cafe,

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the entrance stayed constant during

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period.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

180 words

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keeping animals in capitivity such as zoos has been popular, even now that they have evolved into ‘animal park ‘ or similar facilities. do you think the adventages outweigh disadvantages ?

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