the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now file:///C:/Users/Pixel/Downloads/diagram/35e55aae0d169872699080d575d9f09c.webp
The presented diagram depicts the changes that took place in the floor plan of a local library from 20 years ago until now.
As can be seen , from the east to the west side the institution dramatically changed. only just the entrance remained stable.
To commence with the western section , all the CDS,videos and computer games have been removed and replaced with storytelling events and children's fantasy
books
, two sofas are added as well.
moreover
, adult myth booklets have given their place to all reference ones. Not only the books
but also
the reading room has changed to a computer room.Another notable alteration happened to the middle segment of the library used to take up by tables and chairs,however
it removes after 20 years.
The second switch was at the east chunk of the library Add a comma
,however
such
as children's books
which are displaced by the lecture room.Although
adult non-fiction books
have turned into fiction ones,an information desk and self-service machines are joined.Furthermore
,the enquiry desk has been switched to a Cafe, whereas
the entrance stayed constant during this
period.Submitted by Elisa on
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