The most important decision that young people have to follow is what career to choose. do you agree or disagree?
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year in college, ending up studying what they truly enjoy. Most of us fear that, once we have chosen an option there's no going back. Use synonyms
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isn't true since we all have the option to transfer and explore a new profession. Linking Words
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, there is no need to worry about picking the correct Linking Words
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path at an early age.
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shows the impact of several bad Linking Words
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turned into a bad habit. All in all, we should focus on reducing choosing bad options.
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although
picking a Linking Words
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has a major impact on our lives, we'll always have a choice to quit or switch. Use synonyms
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