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The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.

The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.
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The given table described the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010. The description is given below. In the USA, in 2006 it was 9,8, in 2007 it was 11, in 2008 it was 17, in 2009 it was 16,7 and in 2010 it was 20,3. In the EU, in 2006 it was 3,1, in 2007 it was 3,4, in 2008 it was 3,9, in 2009 it was 3,6 and it was 4,1. In other nations, in 2006 it was 2,8, in 2007
as well as
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 2009 it was 3,2, in 2008 it was 3,5 and in 2010 it was 3,7.
However
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, And total in 2006 it was 15,7, in 2007 it was 17,6, in 2008 it was 24,4, in 2009 it was 23,5 and in 2010 it was 28,1.
To conclude
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, the highest was in 2010. The data is about 2006 to 2010.

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