Topic 14: (25/06/2016) Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, how to allocate the government's expenditure has undergone a discussion between the two opposite extremes, the

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for promoting healthy lifestyle programs or the

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of

patients

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having extremely reasonable reasons to support their standpoints. In my humble opinion, I do agree that finding spending on a healthy

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strategy exhibits more vital rather than

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because it benefits disease prevention.   One of the compelling merits of disease prevention is prolonging citizens' average

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, because some types of chronic diseases, like high blood pressure.

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patients

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can use some unique medicines to control the development of it, irretrievable harm to

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extending the average

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, rendering it one of the paramount beneficiaries within the government's financial

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. Except for the demonstrated advantage, the

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for promoting a positive lifestyle definitely saves more on the government's fiscal outlays, since expenditure spending on medical

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is always significantly higher compared to that promoting program, especially for some serious diseases like cancer.

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extra funding can be allocated to other items,

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as basic infrastructure construction. All in all, a large amount of money allocated to the

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of healthy programs is a wise decision for local authorities. In stark contrast, some individuals are proposing that it is not reasonable for local hospitals to be given the most parsimonious portion of the

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spending.

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is because the hospital usually needs to take major responsibility to treat

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, including someone who cannot afford the

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fee. In short, increased spending on medical institutions is vital equally. In summation, the

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for healthy

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shows two undeniable advantages, extending local people's

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and budget saving.

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funding spending on

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has its necessity.

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, health insurance may become a useful solution to address the problem of the lack ability of to pay medical fees, so

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for healthy

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shows more significance.