The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Recently the issue that has been brought into focus is multinational

companies

are growing. It is generally believed that it is influenced globally. I fully agree with that. In

this

essay, I will take some factors to prove

this

statement. No one can deny the fact that the development of multinational

companies

bring

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brings

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extensive economic to

country

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the country

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. Part of the explanation lies in big

companies

have

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having

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branches around the world. It means the local syndicates are losing advantages.

For instance

, in

Vietnam

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,Vietnam

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many people work at local syndicates but were fired because of staff cuts.

By contrast

, if multinational

companies

do not grow, everyone will not know about the products of

country

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the country

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other.

Therefore

, it is important that

companies

should develop use products to sell reason.

Apart from

this

, another aspect is the growth of multinational

companies

combined with globalization will create positive effects for all. It may give rise to a number of problems

such

as the job, the health of people,

quality

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and quality

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products. Nothing could be more apparent than the evidence that many people from everywhere thanks to the media to know big cities in Vietnam come to Vietnam and work for extensive cities.

On the other hand

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

200 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

What is your opinion about a success of a team: does it depend on mental attitude of the whole team or on the strongest individual? Discuss. Give relevant examples.

Task 1 The images below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain. summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at the least 150 words.