The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently the issue that has been brought into focus is multinational
companies
are growing. It is generally believed that it is influenced globally. I fully agree with that. In
this
essay, I will take some factors to prove
this
statement. No one can deny the fact that the development of multinational
companies
bring
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extensive economic to
country
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the country
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. Part of the explanation lies in big
companies
have
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branches around the world. It means the local syndicates are losing advantages.
For instance
, in
Vietnam
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,Vietnam
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many people work at local syndicates but were fired because of staff cuts.
By contrast
, if multinational
companies
do not grow, everyone will not know about the products of
country
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the country
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other.
Therefore
, it is important that
companies
should develop use products to sell reason.
Apart from
this
, another aspect is the growth of multinational
companies
combined with globalization will create positive effects for all. It may give rise to a number of problems
such
as the job, the health of people,
quality
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products. Nothing could be more apparent than the evidence that many people from everywhere thanks to the media to know big cities in Vietnam come to Vietnam and work for extensive cities.
On the other hand
,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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