The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
The given picture illustrates the way to re-process the
paper
from the garbage.
Overall
, there are six steps in the process of reusing paper
, commencing with the collection of waste material, and culminating in a papermaking machine where usable paper
is made.
The first step is
when paper
materials are collected from collection points such
as public paper
banks and businesses that generate plenty of used paper
. This
paper
is then
categorized by hand and separated according to
its grades, with any paper
that is
not suitable for recycling being eradicated. Following
this
, the selected paper
is transported to a paper
mill where it continues to be treated.
In the next stage, the paper
is cleaned and pulped, and other objects such
as staples are detached. After that, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper
at the de-inking stage. Finally
, having been processed in a paper
-making paper making
machine, the pulp is transformed into a new Add a hyphen
paper-making
paper
which is ready to be used.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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