the chart below shows the precentage of people who ate five protions of fruite and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

the chart below shows the precentage of people who ate five protions of fruite and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The supplied column graph compares the consumption of fruits and vegetables among
children
,
men
, and
women
in the united kingdom based on the percentages from 2001 to 2008. Generally,
it is clear that
the rate of consuming fruits and vegetables increased moderately among
children
and
men
in the covered period. At the beginning of the period, the rates of consumption in
children
,
men
, and
women
stood approximately at 12, 18, and 23 per cent, respectively. These numbers increased constantly until 2006 when
women
led the way in comparison with
children
and
men
and reached 35% in eating fruits and vegetables. From 2006 to 2008,
although
the consumption of healthy foods in
women
dropped slightly and reached 25% in comparison with 2006, which was 35%,
women
still kept leading in healthy foods among
children
and
men
, which was around 24 and 27 per cent, respectively by the final year of the period (2008).
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