Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Foreign languages are thought by some to have detrimental effects on society and
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experience.
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agree that
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can see no likelihood of practical
problems
whereas
I believe that living in a foreign country without knowledge of their native tongue leads to communication and social
problems
. With
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to social
problems
, the impact that communication skills and understanding situation is fundamental to members of social groups. If individuals who have migrated abroad
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don't have general knowledge of that country's
language
, they will struggle to take part in social lives
such
as; studying at school, purchasing required things and communicating with people so on.
Therefore
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usually appeared between travellers and native people.
Consequently
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problems
, the entry requirement of many countries and international universities consists of the certification or proof that how well they have possessed
this
language
.
On the other hand
, the effect of speaking a foreign
language
constantly may lead to impairment of own native
language
capabilities which is thought the one of the troublesome
problems
by some populations.
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there are some probable drawbacks, it is considered that adolescents have possessed motherhood
language
by their 20s.
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, my friend who has the same age as me, has been living in London for 5 years and she has not had any experience of difficulty in talking with me.
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agree that foreigners confront difficulty with social life
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think there isn't adequate evidence that proves the practical
problems
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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