Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?

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world are indeed facing the issue of a tremendous increase in

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rate in

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era. Because of

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,

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believe that there should be more military

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patrolling the

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. I partly agree with

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point of view. There are several reasons why it is helpful to mitigate crimes when there are more policemen on the

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.

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, patrolling can prevent illegal activities as

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might help create a sense of fear in the minds of criminals. If police

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are out on the

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of violent areas,

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there will be fewer illegal activities because they can get caught.

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, the lack of surveillance potentially leads to more unlawful activities.

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, it gives citizens a sense of protectiveness.

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, if there is a lawbreaker

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, it is easier for

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to report it to policemen and they can arrive at the

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scene faster, ultimately resulting in saving the victim from the adversaries.

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, I do believe that there are other ways to minimize disobeying

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instructions. The first solution is that cameras can be installed on the

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and shopping areas for surveillance purposes.

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allows the police department can possibly keep the order of the

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remotely and may take action in time with any lawbreaker’s actions.

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, the mentality of the

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and the

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system needs to be changed.

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, many officials of

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are

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corrupted

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and have joined hands with the bad guys to earn some extra money. The administration needs to make sure that

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officers

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get severe punishments for their betrayal of the community, eventually ensuring that

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enforcement

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get implemented at the ground level and

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all criminals may get strict punishment.

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, I do agree that installing more police

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on the ground can help prevent lawlessness, but

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is not an effective way. To effectively reduce

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, the government needs to work on changing the mentality of

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, and make stricter laws, so that no offender gets out without any sentence.