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the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 provided chart illustrates three types of calls which were carried out in the UK, in a period of seven years from 1995 to 2002. Each kind of call is measured by the total number of
minutes
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Overall
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, it can be seen that the usage of British people to make local calls through the fixed
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 was the highest compared to the others.
To begin
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, in 1995, humankind in the UK made around 74
billion
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minutes
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 of local calls via the fixed
line
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, but the
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 of calls were made by mobiles, at about 4
billion
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minutes
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Although
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 there was an increase of local calls through the fixed
line
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 by British folks over the following years, a drop in using the fixed
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 to make local calls started, in 2000 and it stopped, at about 70
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minutes
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, in 2002.
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, there was a constant rise in the use of fixed lines to make national and international calls by English individuals, which started, at around 39
billion
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minutes
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, and stood up, at around 52
billion
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minutes
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. Regarding mobiles, even though their use to make calls was very low, in 1995, there was a gradual rise in their usage to make calls, until it reached, around 42
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minutes
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, in 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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