the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.

the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.
This
provided chart illustrates three types of calls which were carried out in the UK, in a period of seven years from 1995 to 2002. Each kind of call is measured by the total number of
minutes
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the usage of British people to make local calls through the fixed
line
was the highest compared to the others.
To begin
, in 1995, humankind in the UK made around 74
billion
minutes
of local calls via the fixed
line
, but the
minutes
of calls were made by mobiles, at about 4
billion
minutes
.
Although
there was an increase of local calls through the fixed
line
by British folks over the following years, a drop in using the fixed
line
to make local calls started, in 2000 and it stopped, at about 70
billion
minutes
, in 2002.
In contrast
, there was a constant rise in the use of fixed lines to make national and international calls by English individuals, which started, at around 39
billion
minutes
, and stood up, at around 52
billion
minutes
. Regarding mobiles, even though their use to make calls was very low, in 1995, there was a gradual rise in their usage to make calls, until it reached, around 42
billion
minutes
, in 2002.
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