The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied  they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates how many people visited Ashdown Museum before and after remodelling. The pie charts demonstrate the satisfaction of visitors in the same period.
Overall
, we can see that remodelling had a significant effect on the number of visitors and their satisfaction that both of which had a dramatic increase in their numbers. The year before renovation only 74,000 people visited the museum and half of them were dissatisfied or very dissatisfied, 40% and 10% respectively. In comparison with the next year
this
number fell dramatically and reached 20%, 15% dissatisfied and 5% very dissatisfied.
On the other hand
, after
refurbishment
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roughly 20000 visitors were added.
In addition
, their satisfaction increased significantly by about 30%, before refurbishment one-third and under one-fifth were satisfied and very satisfied, and the next year they reached 40% and 35% respectively. The group of people who didn’t have any response remained at 5% in that period
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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