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Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on tv program that you have recently seen. Write a letter to the television company. In your letter -Mention when and why you watched it -Say why you liked it so much -What effect it might have on other people.

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Dear Sir or Madam, After compliments, I am writing to congratulate you on your successful Channel 7 sports program. I have been following the
show
 for more than two years and still enjoy watching it every week. I like the
show
 so much because it covers all the national and international sports activities. The most thing that grabbed my attention is the detailed reportage of your team which explain in detail the analysis of each event. In my opinion, your
show
 is truly an addition to national television programs. It will educate the new generations about the possibilities that they have.
Also
, the
show
 discusses all the difficulties that our local teams face. Because, you are so fair in reporting, and you are not preferring any team over another.
However
, I found myself obliged to write a thankful letter to you for your tremendous efforts, excellent programs, and exceptional reports. Looking forward to your successful shows always. Yours sincerely, Mohamed Ammar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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