You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment a year ago. You left the apartment last month in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, introduce yourself and say why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible action if he/she does not agree to refund the amount Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Marllote, My name is Georgia Henry, one of your old tenants, who had been renting one of your apartments at Humberline Drive . Today, I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction that you have not sent me my refundable deposit, in fact, it has been already a month since I left your place.
Initially
, I want to remind you that I have provided your apartment in good condition as it was before,
however
, I have not received any updates on
this
matter since
last
month.
Consequently
, as per the terms and conditions of our agreement that we had made before renting your place, I request you to forward a full refund that I paid you. I am already frustrated as you have not provided me with my money, not even,any update about it. I would suggest you send it as soon as possible,
otherwise
, I would take legal action against you and sort
this
matter out in court. Your`s
sincerely
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, Georgia Henry.
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