Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A part of people

is

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heating up the idea that the disappearance of some types of

plants

and animals is the most serious problem in our age.

However

, others advocate the notion that other problems should be paid attention to.

While

I believe that there are many issues related to the environment, I would argue that the former is the main one. On the one hand, the actions of people have led to many difficulties in the world. Increasing in the worldwide population which means many activities

such

as producing, manufacturing or transporting are witnessing an ascending trend.

This

phenomenon

raises

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a detrimental effect on the surroundings. Global warming or the greenhouse effect have caused many severe weather conditions,

for example

, storms, flood, and tornados. Governments have to set aside a significant part of the country’s budget to recover the consequences and help those suffering from these.

On the other hand

, more serious results may turn up when some kinds of

plants

and animals gradually disappear.

Initially

, the world will be in a mess. Not only do those come from nature, but our human beings are

also

a part of the food chain. We take food sources from these species and they act the same as us, finding their food in the environment they live

.

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Because of

this

fact, when a group of nature inhabitants is in trouble, there will be a lack of foodstuff and the balance between these symbiotic relationships may be lost.

Furthermore

, the later generation cannot stare at the beauty of these types. For vanished species, it will be nearly impossible for scientists to recreate the equivalence as it is difficult and

cost

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a huge amount of money to investigate. Plus, for some kinds of

plants

which have the advantage of curing diseases, it will be a great loss when these

plants

no longer exist.

For instance

, peppermint leaves are effective in healing the symptoms of sore throat or headache but if we cannot get access to

this

source, we may have to rely on drugs. In conclusion,

although

harsh weather conditions may happen more intensely when global warming occurs, I agree that the loss of natural creatures is the major theme as it can erase the balance in the world and at the same time,

deletes

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the source for deepening knowledge and curing disease.